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Friday, Nov. 18th, 12:58 p.m. I'm in Hawai'i! Home is great. I love it. More on that later. I have a bunch of random stuff I want to post: (I just tried to spell that "poast") Funny emails from last week: (btw Liberty is the name of my housemate's dog, and the second email is from my mom, whose essay i edited (part of her dissertation) From: yoav@radwin.org i'm not gonna be home until 10:00 tonight, so if anyone wants to or can if not, put her in her crate, so she doesn't choose to use the kitchen que viva la revolucion!! libertad!! yys From: Kei Takahashi I'm not feeling well, so I think I'll be going home soon. I'll take her out. -K From: Calhoun, John That’s cute – you can two can throw up together. -JC ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ From: carrie feuer your edits were great you straightened out some sentences that I knew Excerpts from my EssayEdge "clients": "I’m confident that my personal background and research accomplishments would make me a worthy addition to your esteemed program. Moreover my boyfriend also has a plan for studying in M.D. Anderson. So your school will be prior to any other schools to me." "I began to deconstruct filmic elements and construct them successfully into theories during college." "Regarding your specific edits, I have a few detailed questions below. If answering those questions is out your responsibility or needs additional charge, you can just neglect them." And whoa, this girl is like my hero: (this is in her note to me) "I would really like to bring across that 1)I have achieved a lot within a short period of time (two BA degrees Magna and Summa in just a few years while serving as head of Global Culture Club of my college, Resident Advisor of my floor, senate member); 2)I am fluent in several languages and very subtle foreing accent in all of them, in my last performance appraisal of my current job with the UN, I was listed by the Head of Translation Services of Department of Justice, as one of the best interpreters in the Department of Justice of the UN Mission in Kosovo. As a final work, thank you so much for your hard work. This essay is very much important to me. Kind regards."
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